【请教】英语牛人帮忙啊！

welkin

求一份汉译英的翻译，由于要求比较正式，所以希望高人指教！非常感谢！

需翻译内容如下：
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致有关负责人：
协议已经过我方确认无误并签字，我方电信运营商也已经承诺将于1月1日前完成电路开通，我方现正在积极准备。现将协议给你方两份，请将两份协议签好后将其中一份返回给我们，以完成本次合同的签订。

非常感谢你方在本次电路升级过程中的配合。

谢谢!

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zjmzqq

先用这个译个初稿    http://www.fy-wt.com/fanyi/
再找高人指点措辞

mapleboy

To Whom It May Concern:

The agreement has been confirmed and signed by our side. Our telecommunication company has made a commitment to start the operation of the new line by Jan 1st. We are now actively doing the preparation for the completion of this project. Here are two copies of this aggreement for your side and please have one of the copies signed and returned to us in order to complete the signing process of this contract.

We appreciate your full cooperation in the process of this line ungrading project.

Thank you

[ Last edited by mapleboy on 2004-10-21 at 20:27 ]

英伦子宁

最后一句话可不可以:

Here are two copies of this aggreement, please sign both and return one of them to us to finish the sining process

patrickmeng

"here" 是副词，不可以作为主语！

英伦子宁

楼上的哥们
我还是寒一个~~~
把你学得都交还老师了？

welkin

楼上的各位英语达人，谢谢了！非常感谢！

都送过花了！哈哈！

mapleboy

英伦说得对，原来两份都要签字亚。。是我自己没看清。

nello

厉害厉害，羡慕。。。。。。。。。。。

海上新客

似乎有个地方要注意一下：
Here are two copies of ...这句可否换为Attachments are ...或Attachment please find...? Here are更多用于口语场合。