water melody song head

sharpless

  water melody song head

      When will the moon be clear and bright?

　　With a cup of wine in my hand, I ask the blue sky.

　　I don't know what season it would be in the heavens on this night


      I'd like to ride the wind to fly home.

　　Yet I fear the crystal and jade mansions are much too high and cold for me.

　　Dancing with my moon-lit shadow,

　　It does not seem like the human world.
     
     The moon rounds the red mansion Stoops to silk-pad doors,

　　Shines upon the sleepless Bearing no grudge,

　　Why does the moon tend to be full when people are apart?

      People may have sorrow or joy, be near or far apart,

　　The moon may be dim or bright, wax or wane,

　　This has been going on since the beginning of time.

　　May we all be blessed with longevity Though far apart, we are still able to share the beauty of the moon together

[ Edited by  sharpless on 2007-11-27 14:11 ]

Remon

水调歌头？

mix不妥，宜改为melody .


[ Edited by  Remon on 2007-11-27 14:06 ]

jinroly

明月几时有,把酒问青天.

foolbird

我只能说糟糕透了，莎士屁丫来写估计能有几分味道，这样翻译过来，简直是洗脚水泡咖啡

sharpless

以该

Remon

  water mix song head

      When will the moon be clear and bright?

　　With a cup of wine in my hand, I ask the blue sky. (啰嗦，Wine in hand即可）

　　I don't know what season it would be in the heavens on this night（何年or何季？)


      I'd like to ride the wind to fly home. (ride太粗鲁，不妥，fly home in wind）

　　Yet I fear the crystal and jade mansions are much too high and cold for me.

　　Dancing with my moon-lit shadow, （弄谁的shadow?,底下懒得看了，工作。)

　　It does not seem like the human world.
     
     The moon rounds the red mansion Stoops to silk-pad doors,

　　Shines upon the sleepless Bearing no grudge,

　　Why does the moon tend to be full when people are apart?

      People may have sorrow or joy, be near or far apart,

　　The moon may be dim or bright, wax or wane,

　　This has been going on since the beginning of time.

　　May we all be blessed with longevity Though far apart, we are still able to share the beauty of the moon together

djingle

还以为是water melon

sharpless

谢谢莫老师之教

Remon

嘿嘿，谈不上指教，你在瞎搞，我也在瞎搞。

sharpless

我市转贴的

静静

水調歌頭?

Remon

K，浪费俺的表情，下次转贴要注明！**\ **\ **\

下弦月

俩人一块瞎搞？

Remon

加你就3P了。

sharpless

sharpless

恩，yes

halfpast7

无聊的包子猪~

深圳

又见技术贴，