求一段英文的情诗,用于表白 :[

悟饭

最好是让女孩听了心颤颤那种

希望不要太土

自己实在没有那份才 ,希望得到大家的帮助.NBNBNBNNB

openchen

你在英国待着写篇英文情书还不简单？再好的诗词也比不上自己内心的坦白，哪怕是一句：
I love U

openchen

记住说这句的时候一定要深情的盯着她的眼睛哦

悟饭

我没有在英国啊.
不过你的话是很有道理的 !如果用内心的坦白再加上一点浪漫花哨的英文诗词,女孩会觉得你很用心在这件事情上吧.

现在女孩子看韩剧太多了,喜欢这种套路.

TMAC

那就韩国话得情诗啊...

msqll11

1.
I AM THE WIND
我是风
I am the wind that wavers,
我是那舞动的风
You are the certain land;
而你是那安静的土地
I am the shadow that passes
Over the sand.
我是那跨越你土地的影子
I am the leaf that quivers,
我是那震澶的叶子
You--the unshaken tree;
而你是那宁静的树
You are the stars that are steadfast,
你是那坚定的群星
I am the sea.
而我是那大海
You are the light eternal,
你是那永恒的光辉
Like a torch I shall die...
而我要象火炬熄灭
You are the surge of deep music,
I--but a cry!
你是那深沉乐音的波涛
可我，只会哭泣

msqll11

2.
MISTRESS MINE,
WHERE ARE YOU ROAMING
你是去哪里，我的姑娘啊
Mistress mine, where are you roaming?
我的姑娘哦，你要去哪里？
stay and hear! your true-love's coming
That can sing both high and low;
还是留下来，你的真爱正悄悄来临
听啊！它会高歌浅吟
Trip no further, pretty sweeting,
不要再四处游荡了，美丽的情人
Journeys end in lovers' meeting--
Every wise man's son doth know.
飘荡会止于爱人的相会，这每个聪明人的儿子都懂
What is love? 'tis not herafter;
什么才是爱情？如这还不是
Present mirth hath present laughter;
现上欢乐，显出笑声
What's to come is still unsure:
那些将来的依然不能预测
In delay there lies no plenty,--
这里将没有多少谎言
Then come kiss me, Sweet--and--twenty,
那么来亲吻我吧！妙龄美人！
Youth's a stuff will not endure
青春会稍纵即逝

msqll11

3.
I TRAVELLED AMONG UNKNOWN MEN
我曾在海外的异乡漫游

I travelled among unknown men,
In lands beyond the sea;
我曾在海外的他乡漫游
Nor, England! did I know till then
直到那个时候我才知道有个被称为英格兰的地方
What love I bore to thee.
我能给你什么样的爱情。
'Tis past, that melancholy dream!
那只不过是过去的一个忧郁的梦哦！
Nor will I quit thy shore
我将不会在你的海岸搁浅
A second time; for still I seem
To love thee more and more
这已经不是第一次，我似乎越来越爱你

Among thy mountains did I feel
The joy of my desire;
在你的群峰之间，我享受着欲望的快乐
And she I cherished turned her wheel
Beside an English fire.
在英国人的钩火边，我怀抱着她催动她欲望之轮
Thy mornings showed, thy nights concealed
The bowers where Lucy played;
就在露希曾玩耍过的凉亭，你的清晨已露，你的黑夜逃脱

And thine too is the last green field
That Lucy's eyes surveyed.
而露希的双眸所及，也是你最后的绿地。

FAREWELL, SWEET GROVES
哦再见，可爱的小树林
Farewell,
再见吧
Sweet groves to you;
可爱的小树林
You hills, that highest dwell,
And all you humble vales, adieu.
你盘踞在小山之顶
You wanton brooks and solitary rocks,
肆意而孤独的摇摆
My dear companions all, and you, my tender flocks!
我和你仅有的伴侣是那些温顺的羊群
Farewell, my pipe, and all those pleasing songs, whose moving strains
再见吧，我的笛子和所有快乐的歌声, 以及那些移动着的紧张
Delighted once the fairest nymphs that dance upon the plains;
欣喜的，无比美丽的仙女在平地上起舞
You discontents, whose deep and over- deadly smart,
你的不满，是那些深邃过於平静的苦痛
Have, without pity, broke the truest heart;
毫无怜悯地伤害了那真实的心脏
Sighs, tears, and every sad annoy,
That erst did with me dwell,
And all other's joy
那曾伴随我的叹息，眼泪和每一个愁苦的烦恼
以及所有别的乐趣

Farewell!Adieu,
再见吧！再见吧！

msqll11

5.
She Walks in Beauty
She walks in beauty, like the night
她优美地走着，有同那漆黑的夜
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
就象没有一丝云彩的季节和那群星闪耀的天空
And all that's best of dark and bright
那是最好的黑暗和光亮
Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
就象她的样子和她的眼睛

Thus mellow'd to that tender light
那温柔的光也因此而越加醇美
Which heaven to gaudy day denies.
就是天堂会餐日也会放弃
One shade the more, one ray the less,
越是遮蔽，就越是光芒不再
Had half impair'd the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress,
那些被削弱的无名的优雅
在每一颗漆黑的树上挥手致意

Or softly lightens o'er her face;
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
或柔柔地照亮她的面庞
而那里，思想在安祥而甜蜜的显露

How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.
多么纯洁，多么宝贵的栖息之所

And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,
在那面颊和眉宇之间
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
如此温柔，如此安详，又是多么的动人
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
那胜利的微笑，那流动着的丰采
But tell of days in goodness spent,
告诉白昼慈善已尽
A mind at peace with all below,
一颗多么渴望和平的头脑

A heart whose love is innocent!
一颗充满了无辜爱怜的心脏

msqll11

下面这个是网上朋友自创～～
Be with you, you're everything.
Be without you, everything is you.

和你在一起的时候，你就是全世界。
当你离开我之后，全世界都是你（的影子）。

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msqll11

哎，你们真懒，百度一下是可以解决不少问题的

timedia

直接去抄JOHN LENON的oh my love好了~

Oh my love for the first time in my life
哦,我生命中第一次的爱.
My eyes are wide open
我的眼睛已完全被打开
Oh my lover for the first time in my life
哦,我生命中第一个爱人.
My eyes can see
我的眼睛能看到
I see the wind, oh i see the trees
我看到了风,看到了树....
Everything is clear in my heart
万物如此清晰...在我的心中
I see the clouds, oh i see the sky
我看到了云,看到了天空
Everything is clear in our world
万物如此清晰,.在我们的世界里..

Oh my love for the first time in my life
哦,我生命中第一次的爱
My mind is wide open
我的思想已完全被打开
Oh my lover for the first time in my life
哦,我生命中第一个爱人
My mind can feel
我的思想能感受到..
I feel the sorrow, oh i feel the dreams
我感觉到了悲伤,感受到了梦.
Everything is clear in my heart
万物如此清晰,.在我的心中.
I feel life, oh i feel love
我感受到了生命,感受到了爱.
Everything is clear in our world
万物如此清晰,.在我们的世界里......

mrdestiny

还是得去书店买本英文情诗集
书里的很多，慢慢挑
其实挑个合适自己情况的挺不容易的呢…

thinkpig

你背的下来吗?

luntan

很多英文歌是表白的，很不错的，比如MACY GRAY的I TRY:
I may seem all right, and smile when you leave,
but my smiles are just a front, just a front,
I play it off,but i'm dreaming of u.
and i'll try to keep my cool,but i'm feenin'

here is my confession.
may i be ur possession.
boy, i need ur touch.
ur love, kisses such.
with all my might i try.
but this i can't deny

白发渔樵

情诗，呵呵。

wwjjyy

我觉得还是我们博大精深的中文好

flywater

显然楼主的目标是个外国mm……

月光疾风

QUOTE:

原帖由悟饭于 2007-4-5 10:04 发表

我没有在英国啊.
不过你的话是很有道理的 !如果用内心的坦白再加上一点浪漫花哨的英文诗词,女孩会觉得你很用心在这件事情上吧.

现在女孩子看韩剧太多了,喜欢这种套路.

A片害了中国男人
韩剧害了中国女人

悟饭

我也谷歌过了,主要是想要比较贴近情况的. **\

谢谢你们.

悟饭

我知道韩剧让女孩们内心充满了幻想. **\

luntan

月光总结得有高度！

Men-Long

QUOTE:

原帖由 msqll11 于 2007-4-5 10:21 发表

下面这个是网上朋友自创～～
Be with you, you're everything.
Be without you, everything is you.

和你在一起的时候，你就是全世界。
当你离开我之后，全世界都是你（的影子）。

这个好，简略又有深意，在咏颂时，语音要低沉，神情地望着对方的眼睛，语气要缓慢半拍，要有催眠师的效果最好～～

blackjack

I love you when you get cold when it's 71 degrees out. I love that it takes you one hour and a half to order a sandwich. I love that you get a crincle above your nose when you're looking at me like I'm nuts. I love that after spending a day with you, I can still smell your perfume on my clothes. And I love that you're the last person I want to talk to before I go to sleep at night. And it's NOT because I'm lonely and it's NOT because it's New Year's Eve. I came here tonight because when you realize you want to spend the rest of your life with somebody, you want the rest of your life to start as soon as possible!
--when harry met sally

白发渔樵

MM什么专业的？英文好吗？呵呵

黑呀黑呀

中式英语.....爱老虎油....

白发渔樵

还是《诗经上邪》好
上邪！
我欲与君相知，
长命无绝衰。
山无棱，江水为竭，
冬雷震震,夏雨雪，
天地和，乃敢与君绝！

By heaven,
I shall love you
To the end of time!
Till mountains crumble,
Streams run dry,
Thunder rumbles in winter,
Snow falls in summer,
And the earth mingles with the sky
Not till then will I cease to love you!

[ 本帖最后由白发渔樵于 2007-4-6 09:57 编辑 ]

Toogle

QUOTE:

原帖由 flywater 于 2007-4-5 12:11 发表

显然楼主的目标是个外国mm……

不知道是哪国的呢？

wangyj108

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